
Each student exchanged a sealed box containing five items. Two sonnets were written. One speculating on what could be in the box and a second written after the contents were revealed. I asked that when they opened the box that they pretend the items in the box were the last missive from the person who sent the box.
The Sonnet exercise was unusual. Each student prepared a small box with five items that were precious to them, labeled it with their name and taped it shut. The boxes were exchanged with another students. Two sonnets were required. One was written speculating on what could be in the box and the second based on the items they found upon opening the box. I asked them to imagine that these items were left to them by their partner and were the only reminders thy had of them.
Brandon Buonacorsi
Sonnet before Opening the Box
What lies within this six sided contraption?
The question begs itself rhetorical
The answer is known to be expression
For its creator chose things that are metaphorical.
The box transformed into an icon
Containing the very things that show
What lies in the very corners of her fond
Memories of existence and life’s glow.
Whether the treasure be figurative or literal
The meaning behind the five items remains the same
The meaning is love and love quintessential
Love of memories and hobbies and people and fame.
The opening of such a box deserves much respect
Because the box is a person not a meaningless neglect.
Sonnet after the box was opened
With the white box now open
And its meaningful contents visible glory
I can take a look at each token
And see Lily’s inner soul story.
The azure ribbon of remembrance
Of a loved one once walking upon earth
And the card of a boy, whose bond had sustenance
Both show people who to her, have quality worth.
The sounds of song, make her heart just dance
As well as a jingling trinket from across the ocean.
A locked lock, for a diary perchance?
Which helps to control her mind’s commotion.
The box revealed to be a trove of representation
Of loves, desires, secrets, motivations.
The taunting treasures were finally seen
Filled with symbolism and obviousness
A picture with the a scene so serene
And floss to intensify her happiness
A miniature remote in which she controls
A pair of tube socks with music notes
And chapter 14 in a fan-like fold
Ones wonderful treasures, for her they denote.
As for me, I’m so lucky to be able to see
What was inside the brown rectangular box
I’m hoping she’ll say the same for me
So many meanings, in such a small box.
It was a pleasure being able to see
The near & dear treasures of Sabrina Berci
Alyssa Villa
The Box
(before Opening)
Oh lustrous black block
What secrets do you hide
As you sit there and mock
Inviting me to look inside
The temptation is there
Calling my name
As I sit and stare
Almost losing this game
Might there be pearls
Perhaps a lover’s note
Even a doll’s soft curls
A child’s toy boat
Yes, at last it is time
I may open it after the final rhyme
(after opening)
Now I See
I slipped off the rubber bands
And gently took out
What had been placed by another’s hands
And saw what she cared most about
An elephant similar in hue
But soft in feel
Compared to the polish of Caribbean Blue
And quite unlike the journal of teal
These were companions to an Eiffel Tower
Perhaps a fond reminder of a trip
Underneath a dream catcher humming with power
Her life now depicted as a short film clip
The mystery is now finished and done
My what a tale my mind had spun
Dani Ponce
(before opening the box)
The box sits on my desk so innocent
Yet somehow it manages to mock me
Was it once stored inside someone’s basement?
I wonder what that rolling sound could be
The owner taped the box with utmost care
The transparent tape is no help at all
Could something inside possibly be rare?
Wait! That thing that’s rolling could be a ball!
So big a box for things that seem so light
Are dreams and hopes hidden in these four sides?
The prospect of discovery excites
What mysterious things in this box hide?
For now I will have to wait and ponder
Until I find out what could be yonder
Discovery
The smiling faces and celebration
From these photos I can so clearly see
A family that’s full of elation
Friendships and family a major key
A two-winged creature that beholds a cross
A man’s stern face with unmatched facial hair
To lose this foreign item a sad loss
Romanian heritage a cool flair
The rolling item that had me guessing
A pink unassuming tube of Chap Stick
A small hand held bible full of blessings
Implies an unyielding set of ethics
A girl with principles and loyalty
Her inner self shows to me much beauty
Sabrina Berci
The Green Box
(before opening the box)
You, Green Box, who lays there, sits there, and stares
Do you know that you taunt me? Do you care?
Your color, it whispers, "I know your need"
I never thought a box would come for me
You see, I forgot to pay a good friend
For some money she said she never lends
But with her mouth made an exception
And now I am stuck, wond'ring this question
Does your outside foreshadow gifts within?
Oh, I know your master packaged some in
For though she is not, dressed in haughty things
I know in your box, she hid some bling bling
So great Green Box I know I must give back
Would you be so kind, to lend what I lack?
Barbara
A green box filled with small, simple pleasures
Stories behind them of greater measure
A writing utensil, listening device
A quarter, a pin, a shield for the eyes
Barbara the DJ, the agent, the spy?
Barbara the student that's in a disguise?
These do not seem to fit her very well
We can only guess what she means to tell
Broken headphones, a sign of drowning out
The world all around her, that creates doubt
Her love for writing, we can't understand
Yet she'll keep on rhyming, pencil in hand
And when she's through, she'll pull out her token
Buy a gum ball, and leave words unspoken
Allie Gurvitz
The Box
before opening the box
The big, white box is full of mystery,
The wonders and the possibilities.
Her secrets kept in here from history,
Her life is in here with no boundaries.
As the contents bounce from bottom to top,
Each object rolls around and clings as one.
They move together like leaves that will drop,
A pen, a box, or even a button.
What could possibly lie within this box?
Five simple objects important to her.
The amount of guesses goes on for blocks,
Items that comfort and provide nurture.
I can’t wait to discover this secret,
I will then see the things that are private.
The Box part 2
The big, white box no longer a mystery,
No more wonders and possibilities.
Her secrets now shared from history,
Her life is exposed with no boundaries.
The little baby doll, which she loved to share
Stayed with her throughout her childhood.
She had a big smile and long, thick hair,
This baby doll made everything good.
Then there was the pencil and postcard,
Objects that were significant to her.
A mini soccer ball, for playing in her yard,
And earrings to represent her girly side better.
I can’t believe I discovered her secrets,
I was able to see what lies in her pockets.
Barbara Bonaparte
With the shake of this box I hear a clank
With another I hear paper rattle
Don’t shake it too hard I know it will break
Figuring this out with be a battle
All the items in the box must be small
At some points you can’t distinguish the sounds
If I shake it hard it sounds like rainfall
There’s not much in the box. It weighs 1 pound.
I just heard a clunk, there must be metal
Reminds me of my pencil box, back when
Whatever is in this box just wont settle
I will take one more shake and guess again.
This box is so small much but it holds so much
Someone’s dear treasures that you dare not touch.
Sonnet #2
After Box was opened
Soaking wet denim and a heavy heart
Dinner reservations; 2 forks, 1 mouth
You’re already finished while I’m at start
I’ll be leaving soon; I’ll be headed south.
Loves a two way street; I see no headlights
Somewhere along the way you crashed and burned
Strictly platonic, no passion at night.
I can’t comprehend, I refuse to learn.
I came here for you, my love was that strong
Unconscious love, but I feel all the pain
I saw past your issues, and all of your wrongs
So far away but my love will remain
It will take time to my wings to adjust
At this point flying solo is a must.
Danielle Brown
Of Greater Value
My eyes curiously probe the box,
searching for undetected clues
But, the box sits mysteriously, staring and mocks
So I stubbornly decided to muse
Perhaps inside lie precious pearls.
An ancient Indian treasure could be hidden within.
Or the crown of a princess who once danced and whirled.
It could be a pirates most prized possession, a bottle of gin.
More likely this box holds something more prized
Like a dried rose in memory of a past lover
Or a mask from prom that someone used as a guise.
All I know for sure is that it’s something I can’t uncover.
Strange, that something can be meaningless to one person,
but to another without this something their life would be worsened.
Giselle Rodriguez
This Box
How can I guess what’s inside of this small thing
A rectangular box that’s colored green
This box could carry something amazing
Could be something my eyes have never seen
What great responsibility I hold
To care for something special of hers
She said it was fragile, maybe it’s old
This box, it holds infinite wonders
It holds an object, sliding back and forth
Almost begging for me to open it
What might be in this box, with so much worth?
If I don’t find out I might throw a fit
This impatience is driving me crazy
But I’m just going to have to wait and see
The box #2
The box, once filled with so much mystery,
So unpredictable and demanding
It’s now useless and unnecessary
Just a container, now filled with nothing
Five different items once found inside
So unrelated and a little strange
I see a photo and wonder what it hides
Because on it I see a small change
It is a picture of a family
On it, a smudge, perhaps caused by a tear
From memories of when she was happy
Maybe because now they are not near
If this is the reason, I can relate
To see them once again, I cannot wait.
Jessica Patru
The Mystery Box
This square box is a mystery to me.
I guess its secrecy by its masked looks
What could that soft rattling and clinking be?
Is it a book,maybe several books?
A world of possibilities impart
I hear the clinking of a paperclip and
Keys that unlock the treasure of her heart
Coins clatter, dance, and show her worth firsthand
Paper and something plastic mixed it seems
A life’s promise is in this precious box
It tells her story; all her hopes and dreams
Time in this box not fading like a clock’s
This box holds her most treasured belongings
It contains her past and future dwellings.
After the box was opened
What That Box Held
Your box was filled with five things dear to you
Each item constitutes something special
Your love of literature is virtue
To you a good book is so essential
They say a picture is worth a thousand words
If so, your pictures tell a whole story
A story of life and friendships in thirds
A story of adventure and glory
You are all smiles with your prized family
For you know not to waste a life’s moment
You and your friends—A commonality
Your sense of wellbeing is not dormant
You prize safety and health with a band-aid
And a CD shows your music crusade.
Elizabeth Harrison
This Little Green Box
What ever could be in this little green box
It is so innocent and so very small
Covered all over in colorful dots
There really could be anything at all
Mementos and reminders of her past
Gifts, pictures, symbolic tidbits or awards
I can't wait to open it at long last
What part of her life do these things lean towards
You can't trap your self into just five things
But what you choose to share shows who you are
That's what determines what each of us brings
Which is what we are yet to learn this far
I just can't wait to see what she chose
Right now whats in that box, only she knows
after the box was opened.
Her Choices
I can now glimpse what makes you who you are.
I can guess at the world that you come from.
No need to wish upon a falling star.
I have everything I need and then some.
A picture to remind you of your love.
To acknowledge accomplishments, a tassel.
Sports sunblock to show what you're capable of.
To show your fairness, a referees whistle.
A special necklace given as a gift.
Priceless treasure only in your own eye.
And a simple pin so easy to lift.
Showing so well your Aggie pride.
The things you chose show who you really are.
They tell us all that you will go so far.
Juby Geli
Tupperware Box
Little box of mystery I now hold
No bigger than the small height of my head
Light as air is the mass of this leasehold
Yet heavy is the secret, stays unsaid
The clear plastic reveals no truthfulness
As the inscrutable objects show squat
But bunched paper that prove the sky cloudless
During a day when the weather is hot
Still I wonder what lies inside this case
Surely objects of her joy and rapture
Which might lead her mind to a blissful place
Items she was blessed enough to capture
Such an enigma is this small package
Uncertain am I of its rare message
The Open Box
The box so light is now revealed, open
The private items can no longer hide
The interest of the secret not rotten
A view of joy or sorrow, it decides
A hair-tie is laid on thin crumpled sheets
A pencil is trapped in the confined space
A small empty packet of tea completes
The bubblegum sweetness caught in the case
The pencil and bubblegum fit her well
As I remember her clear thoughtful smiles
But the tie and tea packet makes me dwell
That I can’t work out her other profiles
Still I am glad I was trusted enough
To carry around her valuable stuff
Nicole Schrager
The Box
This sturdy box shipped from far away lands
reveals its past through dates, stamps, and stickers.
Let the ease of its passing from old hands
reveal its heart through more than mere flickers.
A sinister burden waits, crouched inside,
or beacons of hope, of lovely desire.
Or might it contain a subtler side
Axioms bared per a memory’s choir?
My tragedy will never be well known-
mysterious anguish, plaguing my mind.
It’s flutters of clues shadow me alone.
Respite from it I dread I’ll never find.
Aside, trapped in it’s immovable form-
the true essence of its holder, forlorn.
the true essence of its holder, forlorn.
Lily Viek
Box full of Mysteries
All taped up so no one can peek inside
Mystery box, what trophies do you keep
What symbols of life are you forced to hide
What dark secrets have you buried so deep
All these special items concealed so well
In a box of cardboard with tape so green
What stories could your items have to tell
What exciting adventures have you seen
Notice the different noises you make
As the items you hold move round and round
Louder and louder as your contents shake
Listening closely to label the sound
Oh cardboard box that I wish to explore
I wish your appearance would tell me more.
Items of Love
Cardboard box with many stories to tell
Cardboard box I’m so eager to explore
You concealed your contents so very well
Items with stories that need tell me more
A book of time for silent reading
Pictures of friends to cherish forever
These friends of yours that your heart is needing
So much fun and forgetting them never
The sound of music to relax your mind
And an accessory to hold so dear
Secrets to uncover; stories to find
While the significance remains unclear
Oh items of love what have you to hide
What stories do you have hiding inside?
Marielissa Alvarez
Hidden
I have Allie’s box
And I am left to wonder what’s inside
When I look at it all I see is a green box
But the contents inside seem to hide
These five items represent something
If I only knew what they were,
Then I could unscramble what is so adoring
So unique, so beautiful, and there to adore
These hidden objects
Are disguised by their sound…
This makes this one of my hardest projects,
Although the sound is so profound
It is true that this box is small
But I cannot wait until these treasures are reveled to all
Hidden part II
I have Allie’s box
I wanted to be surprised
And I have finally opened the box
I was surprised, amused, intrigued,
A sorority pin lays way inside
May indicate her sisterhood
A pink highlighter stood on the side
May in tell she likes to highlight because she’s good
There was a blue pen on the corner
Could it be she likes to write from north to south?
And there was an orbit gum cartridge, to show me something ‘bout her
So I believe she likes a clean mouth
A crunch bar mini size is all that is left
Leaving me out of breath
Nicole Schrager
A rich and closed book
You’ve showed me five objects tied to your past-
an innocent and random mix it seems.
I hope they will tell your story at last
but to decipher it I need the means.
How I wish your life was an open book
so this riddle could be clear and easy.
I’d know all about you with just a look.
Uncertainty makes me really queasy.
Silver cross, souvenir shell, penny, gum,
plus the heavy Pride and Prejudice tale.
Your closed book must equal more than its sum
yet its so unclear its written in braille.
Perhaps these things are worthy of your past
but its richness might leave this stuff outclassed.
Alan Talavera
Box Sonnet
A simple worn figure
Six sided, brown
For a stranger, dear
So I will guard it- safe and near
Full of hopes, dreams, beautiful things unseen
As if a box could contain one's being
Forged by workers of capitol machines
Setting their own dreams down, so freeing
And perhaps I am wrong on all accounts
And a box is a box is a box is
A box always and forever amounts
To the product of its sides
The possibilities are unlimited 10x11
If the owner can't explain, I'm leavin’.
Box Sonnet, After Opening
A star for the heights she aspires to
For even the heavens move to will
And with determination to hew
A life of hope she will instill
Pearls, for the honesty and innocence
With which she honors every act
To be true of personality as appearance
this is the taste of her tact
A photo among from friends soon apart
Seeking their own fortune and fame
Nevertheless kept close in her heart
Never will she forget a name
Finally, a bulb-shaped stress reliever
Because the sestina is giving her a nervous fever
Allison Chew
The Box Opened
What’s inside this box for now is clear
Treasures galore and stories untold
To lose this box, oh do not fear
For their purpose is clear forever to hold
A tennis ball tells of favorite past times
While a battery shows what’s to come
Each of these describe in rhyme
Something about a person and where they come from
The pencil shows his passion for poetry
And the penny has traveled the world
Putting trust in me to take care of these objects is pretty gutsy
But the meaning holds true and unfurled
Treasures kept so dear
Kept hidden inside a box so do not fear
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